/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3168833
If that's an example of your attempt then there's more work that needs to be done than just changing brushes. The problem you're running into is that you're not considering the things he's thinking about when he begins refining his sketch. He already has an idea in his head of what things should look like in perspective, how to render volumes and important shapes to include to properly define the form. His lineart is a scaffolding to help him begin blocking in forms, the lines aren't just lines but are information that help him organize his thoughts regarding form/volume/shape and even lighting.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-ZknWKTpc90

Take a look at this video and I would suggest to use more reference when trying to draw. When drawing from reference you have to make a conscious effort to draw what you *actually* see versus what you *think* you see. Your chains for example, there's a very large link for really no explicable reason when your everyday knowledge of links would tell you that every link is of the same size.

tl;dr it's not the brush, it's your technical skill