/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3223570
Try to keep it more focused when asking for qrit. If you post a clutter of different drawings most people are likely to ignore you, and you won't get anything. Also Try to ask for specifics (anatomy, colors, light, proportions etc). That said let's look at the green girl on the far left (Dominator from wander over yonder?).
Try to get it more fleshed out, your lines don't do your drawing justice when you look at the hair or her left arm. Your shading is WAY too unfinished. You need to utilize light in order to make the body POP, and give it a sense of 3D space. ESPECIALLY on the face and the hair. Look at real life refs, they're the best! And for god's sake finish that hand, it doesn't even look linke one.
Lastly if you wanna talk about the design, you're not doing a very good way of conveying her character. From pic related, you can instantly see, without having watched the show (Which I have not), that Dominator is a mix of feminine and masquline traits. With an elegant skrit and a tall slim figure, but lots of points and spikes on her armor. And perhaps more importantly her everyday shoes. From her design alone we glean that Dominator is strong and to be feared, unafraid, and carefree. This is what you need to have in mind when you draw her, if you want to make your drawing look like Dominator personality-wise.