/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Postan some Carolyn.

>>6664715
>He would do his best to set a good example around children
Shucks. He'll have to be walked-on doing something wrong, then. Thanks.

>>6665250
Pace was good on this second animatic.
I for one am a slow reader in any language, Round 1 had some scenes where even I had to wait, but round 2 felt natural. The rule of thumb is to try to say the lines as if you were the character, to get an idea of the timing. And if it's very slow, for drama, make words appear one by one to keep it more dynamic.
Music choices can have a great influence on what people think of the product, so stuff like the intro song was probably a bad idea. But I listen to the harshest genres of EDM, I didn't flinch.

>>6665324
>and watching YouTube on the side
Thanks for confirming you're ADHD, as requested by anon.