/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6192740
Right girl's arms are too long, if you straighten them you'll notice they will almost reach her knee
>>6192752
Is she meant to be screaming? I find it weird that she kinda looks like she's smiling but I'm not sure what her expression is trying to convey. If it's how I see it, then maybe make it look less like a smile? Something like picrel
>>6192822
It's kinda hard to critique hair details when there are basically none, how do you plan to shade the top of her head? Imo the hair there looks like a bunch of balls, don't really understand what's going on there