/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4232668
you drew her ribcage too short and wide but you placed that part of the bone who is peeking under her boob at the same angle of her head, i dont know if that line near her right elbow is part of her ribcage or her belly buttom, if it's the former then her ribcage is way to wide and short and theres almost not space for her tummy, her legs lack form too. That line abover her cunny it's the adductor longus which is attached to her pelvis bone and leg bone(femur?) and is way too high above her cunny.i think you should place her neck forward a bit more. Her left arm seems dislocated but im not 100% sure.

i dont know with what angle you where going, her legs are in a frontal angle but her head is in an agle that can only be viewed from above along with her neck.

also a good way to have the height of the ribcage is using the top of the shoulder down to the bottom of the armpit, it should be about 3 times it/s height maybe a tiny bit more.