/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

I recently made a conscious decision to draw for at least 1-2 hours a day, since it's a skill i've always wanted to develop.

I'm starting with loomis, which is something i glossed over some time ago but never sat down and drew all of it from page 1 to the last.

I feel like i ruined the drawings a bit when inking them, i only have a shitty rolling ball pen, but it was a nice exercise to try and figure out exactly where the finishing lines were meant to be.

Any tips/criticism at all is welcome. Am i doing good ? should i do something different ? should i stop overthinking and just draw more ? Thank you.