/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3029648
Great job, I'm always worried coloring my line art will ruin it but this looks like it would be great with color on it.
>>3029752
pic related
>>3029724
its a cute concept. I think the boobs were actually better in the first one. in this one they're pushed unnaturally close together. If you want them to have cleavage like that than I think that you would make the bottom have a line straight across instead of the two C shapes you have as the bottom (think about how a bra looks, the bra is straight on the bottom and round on the top, the middle connecter removes the disturbance of the two Cs and makes a gap between them, thus making it just a straight line that represents the line that goes around the woman's ribcage. A little bit of curve at the bottom is good but I think there should be one more line below it)