/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2775080
im back. had some major creative blocks to overcome so updates took a bit longer than i would have hoped. contrast was pretty meh and it didnt really pop in a good way. i think i was too focused on the purple beams from earlier and not enough on the surrounding objects that would, you know, influence how they appear to you. still unsure but im starting to feel more confident in my color choices. or more complacent, i dont know. this is a weird feeling...

>>2775883
the flatness was doing a disservice to the overall structure, because nothing was clearly defined. the poles were blending in with the floors a bit, but they also not framing it how i wanted, because the guard just sort of disappears into nothing at a glance. ill definitely try something with some flat colors next time, but for such an angular drawing i think have so many similar colors is going to kind of shit it up. also im going to change that red, its starting to grate on me i just realized. too bright.