/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

I figured I might as well post some in this thread too. I'm making adjustments on these skeches to post them online eventually. I'll try to correct the wonkier parts but I'm mostly looking for advice on composition and presentation.

>>3927681
It does look better. Yeah the tangent with the tomato can be changed by moving it just a little to the left. I'm still not entirely convinced with the overall tones. There is more contrast on the lower part and not enough around the face. It could be slightly more graphic. Looks great anyway. You can take a few days away from it and come back for the final adjustments with a fresh eye.

>>3927665
The best advice I can think of would be to use a tool that allows you to vary lineweight like an inkbrush. Your lines will look more confident. If you want to work more on this one your next step could be to add simple shadow shapes with a transparent wash and a big brush.

>>3927649
It looks good but the white of the background will mess up your perception of values. If you want to focus on the values and painting I suggest you work on a neutral grey background.

>>3927607
That is just dope

>>3927249
I'm so jelly of your constuction. The lines on the left figure are a little blurry though.