/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1754207
i'd say she looks awkward. when you fleshed out the drawing you lost the liveliness you had in your rough. i suggest that you try to reenact the pose she is making and see what feels off about the picture. furthermore there are some anatomy/stylization problems you might want to look into, particularly the lower body. dont be afraid to use photo references

i scribbled out a quick redraw for you. there are errors in it (like the long torso and foot..) but hopefully it is helpful???