/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6161121
nice attempts, i hope you try to follow through with the whole book too. I drew over this one, if you don't mind. The two problems I isolated was about getting the right tilts of the masses of the torso, and about drawing each solid mass of the torso (head, ribs, pelvis) as more solid blocks. When you draw a form, you need to pay attention to the symmetry of the form and make sure nothing is distorted. Look at the parallel lines I drew over Bridgman's hips, and the same parallel lines over yours. The problem can be resolved by sketching in basic forms first, before drawing the details on top. hope my sketches help