/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2868383
I posted here two weeks ago asking for help with my comics - luckily you guys actually helped me (thanks again).

So I just kinda wanted to show my progess... 2 weeks of intense fundamental learning, watching how movies are framed and so on... this was the old thread >>2851670

So yeah kids... 2-4 hours of fundamental learning a day can help... thought I know... still a long way ahead and all.

The comic is sized down massively to fit the 1000 pixel size.

Basically from here http://pre04.deviantart.net/6d1e/th/pre/i/2017/038/e/a/star_wars___first_order_tales___the_invasion_20_by_dalsifodyas-day879o.png to here http://img04.deviantart.net/2fb5/i/2017/051/f/1/star_wars___first_order_tales___the_invasion_21_by_dalsifodyas-dazsic3.png

Thanks again.