/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2958229
With the overall face, that's what I meant by being able to draw it on a larger scale to be able to draw it smaller. However with the neck, it's a bodysuit, but I didn't color it in because pencil smudging is a fucking nightmare.

I've not much experience with collarbones, I know they're connected to the shoulder and move up and down with it, but I haven't gotten them down yet.

I know legs aren't symmetrical, I tried making the inner parts straighter and the outer parts provide the definition and silhouette.

I only pointed them inward from reference, maybe it's just how teens stand but that's how I've always seen females stand, it looks weird to me.

I can draw an ear, but I can't really get it detailed with my current tools (the ear is about the size of a mechanical pencil lead if you click it twice or thrice) which is why the face is so simplified. Feet I cannot draw for shit.

>>2958378
These are why I need those image tutorials. The only thing I can really proportion right are legs, because I had a guide that said the calf and thighs are both roughly the size of the torso. Thank you for the help though.

As for the pants and the line, that's just how it's designed, I tried to keep it faithful to my character, but I turned the vest into more of a vest because I don't like the original look. The line, like I said earlier, is the end of the bodysuit, but I didn't color it because of smudges.