/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

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I do dislike how OP hasn't taken any of the criticism and advice and applied it to his art. Generally speaking when you post a thread asking for advice and you actually PYW we like to see you take that advice visibly in your future posts. It just kinda feels like your hearing us, but you aren't actually listening. You're still symbol drawing, for example, and your characters look traced from 3d models. There's no gesture to your forms. You're still incapable of drawing a person. If you're referencing like you say (tracing doesn't count as referencing) than you aren't showing it very well.

Looks like you really care about this idea though so I don't wanna discourage you from keeping going but if you just keep doing what your doing well then you can post 500 more pages and I guarantee they'll look exactly the same. Sit down, actually LISTEN to the advice you're being given here and try and apply it to your work. If you don't actually want improve fine.

I have to ask, are you drawing because you actually are passionate about making art, or are you only drawing because you want to illustrate your story? I ask because maybe art just isn't your thing and you should try just writing and hiring an artist to draw your story for you.