/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

(This is a picture and not a scan, the final version will be a scan)
Finished my first page for the zine.

Also,
>/Ic/onography is a gothic sci-fi focused anthology created by the artists of /ic/. The issue will feature nine 20-page comics from different artist.
>the comics can feature fully colored artwork or pure black and white. The paper size will be B5, make sure the image DPI is 300 as there might be interest in possibly printing.
>NSFW concepts are allowed but not straight up pornographic imagery. The NSFW should fit with the story and not the other way around.
>the comic will be left to right, manga styles are accepted but if it's right to left it will not be accepted.
>stories title must include "ic", here is a website with every word including it: https://www.thefreedictionary.com/words-containing-ic

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