/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>5164676
>spends 30 seconds
just that page took me an entire day on it's own
>>5164678
who?
>>5164679
noted
>>5164684
OP is page two since, attached is page one. does that help?
>>5164687
>1.)
noted
>2.)
Believe me I'd love to, but like I said, what you see by itself already took my an entire day. I feel like I'm doing something wrong for it to take so long and look so bare bones.
>3.)
Are you saying I should get rid of the varied line weight, or increase it? There's already varied line weight, but I'll admit it's subtle
>4.), 5.)
Noted