/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2867795
i usually struggle with making things look 3d so I try to draw it more box like to imply it. Is there anything you could suggest to make it more 3d? Would shading help?

>>2867965
yeah you're right about the scratchy lines part, I try not to but my tablet has a really smooth surface so it's hard to control. I think I get what you mean, as in the shoulder is flat at best and if they are raised above that the person is standing stiff or intentionally raising them.

I tried implementing some of the feedback, although I feel like I should just try drawing something else as the fundamental aspects of the drawing are messed up.

Thanks for the feedback, regardless.