/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6672785
I' don't know if it is correct to do a red line here, because you're doing the right thing: Working from reference and doing the grinding, no one should interfere with that, please keep drawing this, as much as you can.

But you said something about the face, and I know it's very discouraging when faces don't look nice, that's what we all want deep inside "At least let me get the face right goddamit" lol. My advice is to simplify the face features, as much as you can. Less is more on faces. Don't delineate lips and teeth. Don't detail noses, avoid the detailed hair, use shape blocks to insinuate a hairstyle, without the hair detail in it. . Just that.

Keep at it man. Do the sketches, all the sketches you can do, don't bother too much to polish them neither, just keep drawing more. Leave the color process for later ahead.