/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

I'm the anon that posted >>1914947.

I'm still trying to figure out how to fix it, or perhaps just move on to the next exercise and grind foreshortening once I'm done with the book.

Anyway, this is what I made previously, and I'm looking for mistakes. To my untrained eye, it looks pretty good, other than the lips (which I always have trouble with). This is probably my less crappy drawing since I started to learn, but I'd like to have some honest criticism on it.

The hair could be a bit better, and the shades around the ear look a bit off, but other than that I can't come up with anything. It's a profile though, and I figure that it's the easiest way to draw a face/head.

Sorry about cutting up a part of the nose, I didn't notice until it was already in my laptop.