/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1705694
well i'd say your main problem is that you haven't got a lot of solidity in there. everything save the face and the lower arms is very squishy and formless.
also the pose is strange. google 'walk cycle' her other foot wouldn't stay flat on the ground like that if she's believably in motion. the whole pose looks sorta painful overall, honestly. ditto with the harp-hand, having a finger raised that high while the other fingers are pressed low is pretty uncomfortable if you try it yourself.

on the whole, your drawing aesthetic is cute, your colouring's not bad, work on your anatomy form and gesture.

>>1705710
do something else with the expression, she looks neither come-hither nor badass, just sort of blank gaze. also i'd de-emphasize the crease(i forget the name) below the nose and above the lips