/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>5090301
no no no man, look at my post >>5090254
get rid of the
>nose shading on the top of it
>gums, make the entire teeth white
>that underlip rendering shit
it's so unappealing that it creates a distraction of the entire picture. my eyes go right to that weird mouth, man. i like it but you need to dump that asap. add more shine to her hair, it looks really dull right now. up to the hue/sat to make the colors more interesting!