/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4785668
not this >>4785739 Anon here

I will only touch the face and head cause no time cause that seems to be the most pressing I would guess you used a ref for the body but not for the hands and the head.

The face appears to be flat as if you are unsure which part goes where in 3D. The head is a sphere and the face is a 3D object its parts move and align based on the angle you look at them. if you loo at it from the bottom view like you drew everything on the lower part moves upward making the chin and the underside of the nose look bigger. The lips start to curve upwards, the eyes also curve upwards and the upper lashes appear longer and thicker. The forehead seems shorter and the hair on the top also seems shorter. The ears also move down to follow the line of the eyebrows and the nose.

Finally the center of the neck becomes more pronounced, the throat, trachea etc. bulge out because the balance of the head moves back so the neck stretches out forward in the front which causes the front muscles to relax and stretch out.

There are some other things, hands weird, perspective slightly off but I think this could help your knowledge most.