/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4340884
ive never had someone give me this much help, thank you so much. a few comments id make, i really didnt want a narrow pointy chin. in some older animes, like pic related they didnt go with the pointy chins and hyper femininity. idk exactly how to describe it but you can see the proportions yourself . that said i can plainly see that your version is way better. basically every facial feature on yours looks cleaner and nicer. so this is something im gonna have to work out. really appreciate the tips about the colors. i have no idea what im doing when it comes to color or makeup at all. i just play around with it until it looks alright. never knew all that about the eyelashes. such good info. im gonna try that on my next one. i just look at references and frankenstein them together really but apparently something are either or, but not both. thakns again, really. ill try to tweek these this weekend and see if i can make them better. maybe thatll help e narrow it down to 2. if you were wondering, one girl is the main characters fiance who is 100% main stream popular, but to him super shallow, and uninteresting and shes actually secretly a demon, and the other girl is more like him. can talk like a normal person. not so flashy in appearance but better to talk to and cuter. basically an e-thot and a nerd dream waifu gf.