/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6763683

The art: your obsession with detail and your more trained illustration style suffers with continuous narrative, movement and dynamism - the number of lines is there, but they are not used efficiently. That's where your lack of experience shows. I know, it hurts to spend so much time on a drawing only to have it last a fraction of a second on the screen. That's why I chose the comic as a format, there I can compact and reduce the details, hiding them with stylization or advantages of the format such as the size and shape of the panel. Otherwise I wouldn't have been able to draw/suffer Alexis so much.
You have the talent, I invite you to edit or animate on your own to understand the timing, to know where to put the viewer's attention and guide their gaze to where the message is - learning to communicate with the minimum becomes essential on many occasions. BBC and Vormio were simple potato bags and you had to make 'em complicated, baka. I think that's your biggest vulnerability, you work so hard that it works against you.

The snow? Great. Whoever applied it. I liked it.

The music and audio: Cool and Epica.

Your best entry but I personally like your r2 just as much.

Luv Kwabexis. Simple as.

The ending. Oh the ending. We cannot talk about the ending. That's Chads responsability now.