/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3339179
>>3339177

Just sketched this too, I loathe it. But my biggest issue is that besides the bad lines I cant really see where did I exactly fuck up (the eyes? everything? how?). That said, I have some hopes that this is just the result of my inexperience with construction and that in a month or two of practice ill get better.

I also dislike the obvious anime inspiration, but well, its just for starters.

>>3339328
Thank you! I did notice the fucked up hands and forearms at least in the second drawing. Ill try to be more analytical when using models next. I didnt completely copy the pose of the model, just started and then changed it a bit to suit my idea.