/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1793279

First of all, fuck you man for not following even half of the corrections I made in the first redline. I attempted a paint over of your drawing to put in place the corrections I was trying to point out. As you can see, I'm awful at painting digitally, I don't give a fuck about the background, and trying to copy your style, but hopefully you get the gist. Your coloring/color choices aren't bad, but your rendering of form is. Not only are your bones/muscles in incorrect places, but they're rendered so strangely that they look somehow flat and round at the same time. I'm not sure how you even managed to accomplish that. Your faces also look extremely uncanny, and I tried to retain the stylization, while also rendering it as much as the rest of their bodies. It still looks like they're wearing kigurumi masks, but at least they're shaded correctly now.

When you're painting, use a fucking reference if you're not sure what something looks like. Start compiling reference images of buff ladies for your bodies, and look at photos of anime figures for your faces. Anime figures are a decent adaptation of something 2D to 3D so that you can get an idea of how form is supposed to work.

To be honest, I really don't even know why I'm bothering with this anymore, but I guess I'm THAT bored.