/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6679731
I think a week because I procrastinate.
>>6679503
Thanks! every time I try to copy this artist style with construction I always make the head wider for some reason, and I'm kinda torn between keeping that proportion or not. And yeah, the scales of things are kinda all over the place.
Also, really nice work on drawing the face. I am by no means an expert, but I'll list you some pointers to help you. I hope you don't mind.
- a more warped angle on the top headband, following the front of the face
- the head is a bit more protruded to the back
- place the side ribbon on the side of the head, not on the back
- the v sign of the fingers are not lined up properly as the other fingers
- the right arm is a bit too long
- the breasts are not attached properly to the torso
- pelvis seems nonexistent
- right leg looks uncomfortable and are not attached properly to the pelvis
You're very much on the way there, anon. I'm also still learning about a lot of things, but pic related is what I had in mind. Feel free to correct me on things that I'm wrong about. Hoping this is helpful for you anon, good luck!