/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4377798
I can see that you were trying to hide the right upper arm behind her torso by implying a bent arm, but it looks unnatural and looks like a little T-Rex arm. Straightening it out and also aligning the other arm, with both wrists bent at a more subtle angle, is a better feel. For your lineart, you may want to clean up your sketches to your taste and see where the weight of the lines work and where it doesn't.