/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2835423
Your proportions are off. Her anatomy is concerning in some areas. I made this redline to help you better understand what I'm seeing. This is the first redline I've ever made for someone, so feel free to call me out on my bullshit. If you think my own proportions are off, please say so. I know having your own style might inevitably alter proportions on the human body, which is fine. If that's what you were aiming for, I understand. If not, I would recommend studying human anatomy more and really try to memorize the muscular and skeletal systems.

I think your girl is cute! Study the human body some more so you can draw her even cuter! Give her the body she deserves.