/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4219024
Also, here's the linework so anyone who has advice can understand what i'm trying to make it look like. The reflective and darker parts just look random, no matter where I put them. It looks metallic but it also doesn't look like it has an actual shape. It's killing me, I've been stuck with this for like a week now.

It's a guy with car suspension pieces for legs. Completely out of ideas lately so literally just throwing figurative darts at subjects to make characters.