/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3024099
Oh hey this is my first in depth critique. You know I've always wanted to ask for one, but I never did. I always felt I could critique myself just as well and so I shouldn't waste others time, even though I frequently felt like asking for one while I was a baddie.

>It looks like you turned off pen pressure and traced it with the stabilizer off
yeah I made it in anondraw, and they don't have pen pressure or layers, and the first little nudge of the pen is fucky, so it was a bit weird.

>but you can always use the eraser or white pen to "taper" the ends
Yeah, I actually did it for some of the hairs, but I dunno, originally I wasn't planning on tapering for any of them. I kinda just wanted to leave all the lines as the same pen size, but then I erased some parts and thickened others, and ended up tapering some anyways.
it's the same reason why the face uses such large lines.

>The face is a bit crooked
Agreed, I have a problem drawing different directions for the face, needs practice :(

>ears don't line up properly, they're too high up.
Don't see what you mean. they aren't normal human ears, and ears generally start at a height just on top the eyelids. Actually I think I see what you mean now, but I still think it's fine.

>but the arm on our right confuses the fuck out of me.
I agree, I didn't put enough care into that one. I recall somewhat halfassing it because I wanted to finish.

>the head is also too small, it makes the thighs look HUGE.
>She has hips for DAYZ
I don't see what you mean at all. Her head, thighs and hips don't look big at all to me, although I do wish I went with more sailermoon esque proportions.