/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2779166
I really like how the face's expression was handled - but I would improve the rendering of the hands as they look a little too sausage-y for my tastes. Maybe try to break up the hands into parts to avoid that? (pic included by @skwndcjfTm on twitter)?

I also would pay attention to how the fat of the buttocks/thighs falls, as it looks a bit odd in this version, but I think further rendering the pose might improve it?? Just some suggestions!!