/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4798480
as someone with schizoaffective bipolar type, and a very vivid imagination, and 5 followers on twit, 25 on Insta
just kill me already, my bed is covered in books and art supplies so I've been sleeping on the edge of my bed for a while and spending every waking moment in my living room drawing and studying japanese

unfinished art, I know it's too busy, it's detail practice, put as much detail as possible, next one is gonna be overly simple, practically enlarged thumbnail, and next will be balanced, but critique me anyway, is the perspective correct, is it shit, am I /beg/, etc.