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Hi everyone. I am trying to learn the color zones of the face but I’m struggling. I saw a yt tutorial on the subject with a male as an example, but I feel like it’s a completely different deal for females (maybe because of makeup?) and specifically in the jaw part I can’t find the right blueish/greyish color to make them feel alive, to make them pop. Here in the example you can see it feels pretty fake, and atm I don’t know what am I doing wrong. Do you have any advice? Even on things other than color zones, any advice is welcome. Thanks