/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2426958
I like the colors and everything, but the face is pretty androgynous right now, anon. I assume it's a woman, but she has a very manly face. Mostly because everything in the face reads as squared and angular, except for the lips. The jaw specially is too squared and long. No cheekbones, the long detailed angular nose bridge, the weird conection between the chin and the neck that makes her neck look fat... More roundness and less lines are your friend.
I decided to procrastinate on what I was supposed to be drawing to make this almost pointless edit to illustrate how I would make the features more feminine, and also spaced the eyes that were too close together.

If it was supposed to be a guy, my only recommendation for you is to turn it off, like a light switch