/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3103896
>Laughably wrong.

>>2815021

I'm no writer but one thing I perceive is that good writers are capable of breathing humanity into their characters.

Your characters are probaly anemic collections of tropes and barelly individuals at all, that's why you fail. You know what you like, but you don't quite understand why.

Think about a situation from history or story, and think how would a character act in those situations and why it would be interesting and how would write it to pass the correct feeling from your impressions. How would it appeal to a public (ie. how would they life through your characters?). Situations are but fancy justificatives, sofisticated catalysts, so those feelings might exist. Not even the character themselves, but their point of view transmited by all those interactions, that is the real gold you want to struck with a tale. With a comic/manga you have all of an aesthetic to back you up or omit instead of writing too much, an equilibrium of showing and telling. Sometimes a simple story which would be called dumb is all saved by adequate use of appelling aesthetics that delivers.

Just an non english speaker and his one cent and a half of an opinion here.