/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2844346
>>2844348

H-hey guys cut it out!

Crit Senses--Are tingling!

werebear I like these lines, these forms, that bonsai tree!

soroneir, excellent colors!

innocent, what a pissed off looking bird-brain, Im getting vulture flash backs egh...

barkode nice legs, Im likin that dark figure at the top right.

rorg excellent
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Lokki, he looks ready to fight, and the colored piece is lookin clean.

shkimmilk, I shouldn't have to say it again, you know what you need to do. I really like those infantry head variants, my favorites are the two on the left.

Rhydwyn nice dinos, the one roaring is impressive!

whizzard I like it! The way he steps out of the orange hue gives it a sense of space.

tabasco that shadow on the wall is noice. Does she have some droopy eye syndrome? She looks pretty tired.

andrae, what a CUTES

Choob I like the colors still, but don't over do the piece now.

aimai, I've always enjoyed your style, but I've always wanted to see you draw some aliens and cute UFOs

aestro that elephant looks great, but man does it look flat in that setting. but you'll be working on that I assume.

manadabes, nice figures, feel those forms and angles.

grach those are some nice rendered heads, that middle one is sweet

lava those pecs on the right seem...off

I'm outta here!

>>2787194
Well aren't you lucky I went out for a late night snack.

The first thing that strikes me is that the shadows, while there, aren't really all that dark, and they probably should be a bit darker. There is a lot of light on her face too right? It reads very brightly on my screen at least, almost washed out, especially on the right most corner of exposed skin.

The shirt...it looks like youre trying to emulate the way it reacts with light? I can see what you were going for if thats the case. Maybe try blending the colors to get a smooth gradient, and use the direction of brush strokes to guide the eyes along the planes of her torso. It would stand to aid the volume of her figure if she had some shadows on her shirt as well.

That's I got for now.

Crit Senses--Are tingling!

Redpandaslave, nice thick outlines on the skull, maybe try some varying line weights around the eye sockets and nasal cavity next time, if you ever do a skull like this again.

Soroneir, nice colors, I like how you got a lot out of the chosen color palette

Viktor my man, not sure if this will help you as it does me(sometimes), but as a warm up try drawing a bunch of 3D shapes and wrapping lines around them, it'll help you get a sense of form in the third dimension

Seffy...That foot is intentional right?...Right?
I like the coloring though.

Toyfu, I like the textures.

Shkimmilk, a cute pilot for a cute mech; as it should be

Aestro, nice deep colors, makes for some nice contrast between the flower and background.

Whizzard, you have a nice character here, and it needs to be perfected to sate me, so fix that foot facing towards the viewer, cause it looks off.

iinaa, work through some hampton or loomis my friend, I prefer hampton though. It really would aid you man. It certainly has for me. But don't forget to draw things you want to/enjoy, it's certainly important to draw for study and to learn, and even more so to put some application into those studies, but sometimes you need to unwind and just draw for fun. Sometimes I realize that when I draw for fun, it points out something that I need to focus on when studying and gives me a kind of guidance on what to do next.

Futashy, I see you are doing some beans. Good.

TekkyJ, an ok sakura. I guess. The muscle study isn't bad though, you've been gettin ok at the torso, legs when.

Caterpillar, nice shirts, render out that black vest though, it's lonely being a flat block of color.

Digitixe, I like the masks/helmets you've been doing. I'll take one full armor set please!

Munch, I'm sure you know, that face on the left most figure needs some adjustments. I like the shawl(I don't know what it really is) on the middle figure, the folds look good.

Echo, I am feeling those forms.