/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3127087
sorry, no pentab so only ms paint line work lol.
the head on the ref is straight (untilted); while yours is tilted.

you made her left arm not straight; while ref is straightened. this tendency to do this is mostly caused by the protruding muscle; but you must learn to see the bones (AKA the stick).

for the other arm, the inclination is 90 degrees; while you did something around 70-80 degrees.

also the clothes falling down should be straight is

legs are pretty gud.

door is, well u can see.

good luck and keep practicing!!!!!!!!! look up for the angle inclinations ^_^