/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3905903
hows your process? i think it seems like you dive too quickly into specific areas instead of making sure your outline is on because i dont think your figures are quite right. also, use a sharper, harder pencil.
>>3906011
i think it's good, everything's good except the face. also i guess this fellow is meant to look like he has shoulded(?) shoulders right? but even his shoulderpards look shoulded(?). I think it you were good you'd be able to make him look slouchy(?) while still letting his armor look like its acutally got structural integrity. put some effort into hands and feet, and the kneecaps need attention too.
>>3906030
impressive. too much focus on tedious detailing, too little focus on creating interest with shading and perspective, though.
>>3906136
sorry, no idea