/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3179777
What is not bad about it? I'm sorry im not trying to insult you I just want you to know the truth but YOU really belong in the beginner thread, you don't know how to render at all, your lines are wonky, you have no idea about anatomy other than the simplest stuff ( meaning boobs legs, arms, head, navel and pussy; though you tried to show the collar bone) , you tried showing some form on the thighs and boobs I give you that, but look at the mess on her thighs, you can see every stroke. I'm not even ggonna talk about the hands which are completely symbol drawing. Her arms look like stumps from the little we can see. What did you even do with her nipples?
The face is the part where you did best because her lower part could be about anything, at least you went into more detail with her head. But your nose looks really bad you should study those, the lips aren't ggood either but better than the nose, the eyes are probably the best part which still isn't good. The hair ends are wrong that's not how render those but the rest of the hair looks actually quite ggood from afar. And to top it all off its not a sexy pose, it's completely stiff and her body type isn't even an attractive one. But that is probably because you don't know much about fore shortening or perspective.

tldr: If you just wanna draw for fun then: Learn some basic anatomy. Look up some tutorials on how to render and if you have to color pick your colors for the body.
You try to draw "realistically" and show the bumps on her nipples but yet you only place small dots.That does not work. Also everythingg about the lower body is bad, if not fort the upper body it could be everything. And go to the beginner thread!

tldr If you wanna get good. Learn anatomy, perspective and foreshortening, look up some tutorials on how to render at least skin, look at photo references.

GO TO THE BEGINNER THREAD. READ THE STICKY!

>>3169046
I just didnt add any tits yet because Im having a hard time drawing those okay?! I just wanted to post something because I never really finish anything and getting my tit skills up to par before posting the picture would take days.