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Anonymous Fri Jun 13 01:15:25 2014 No.1751846 [View]
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>>1751301
You've forgotten her pelvis and hips, so the legs are all wrong. Consider where the legs attach before you draw the clothing.

Her arms are off too. The one at the back going behind her is positioned strangely, and the front one is very small. Her shoulder isn't large enough either.

Her feet are also very short and wide.

I've drawn over yours so you can see where the anatomy has gone off, then did my own fixed version which I know is not perfect but just hoping it's helpful!

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