/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6836671
I think knowing the underlying structure is how you could improve this tenfold, the way the eyes sit in the socket tells a lot about the shadows and shapes of all the individual parts.
Try to simplify, take a look at the eyes in the asaro head for example, try to draw these and try to understand the different planes and their direction.

If you can get the impression of an eye with just a couple of lines, you know you can go into more detail later, again, try to keep it simple.