/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

So, in no particular order, I found a LOT of mistakes in your work that you could REALLY benefit from you changing before calling this work finished, if that at all.

From left to right, which by the way, I flipped your work to see if that helped fix any of the anatomical mistakes as far as the body length was concerned, but sadly, it didn't:

Why is there a highlight coming up from her left foot, when you've clearly established the light source being behind her on the wall in the picture? Why is there any light source reflecting on her ass and on the bottom of her thighs, and on the back of her right calf, for that matter? And why does there seem to be a hard cut edge from light source to shadow on the right side of her body like that? Why is the left hand drawn in so crudely? Why is there such a line tangent going up from the armpit line? Why do the dog tags seem farther back into the background than them actually hanging off her neck, which also calls to the attention, where does her neck start and end? Why did you draw the hair with no tension brought down on it from the force of the bandanna wrapped around her head? And seeing as how our light source is established above and behind her, why does her face have highlight features on it, especially under the hair to the right side of her face, and across the bridge of her nose? And why does the light source seem to glow off the wall like that when it's nowhere near the halogen stick?

I'm sure you can answer these questions promptly, and change the work accordingly as well, I hope. This, doesn't seem to be the kind of work you want to showcase having it riddled with mistakes like that and so close to it being finished.