/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2138864
>Do you maybe have also some advice regarding the colors, which are really bugging me a lot?
Not the other Anon, and I'm not exactly an expert on color theory but here's go my on it.

Everything is too saturated and there's no underlying color or lighting covering the whole image. Pic related isn't exactly ideal since I'm just fucking around with layers and colors, but the gist of it is less saturation/brightness on what's not important (background and darker areas), and contrasting it with what's important (characters, and special highlight to erogenous zones and faces).

But then again it's just a quick wip.