/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>5068372
1 - The perspective here is not translating well at all. Is he supposed to be standing on the floor? Right now, this looks like a midget knight standing on the table. If that was your intention, my apologies.

2 - The forms here aren't reading well either. The values are too dark. I did a double-take at first because it looks like she's standing in an empty sandbox.

3 - While you may have intended to make this guy a directional marker, it looks like he's staring at the midget guy on the table and not at the beast in the doorway. I suggest you make him face the table like the guy in area 4 and turn his head towards the beast or just delete him altogether and move the innkeeper to the head of the table.

4 - His body is weird. That much roundness at the top of his back suggests he doesn't have a neck and the lower region of his back is completely square and unnatural.