/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2551241
Looks pretty cool anon. I tried a paintover but it didn't turn out that well. I wanted to fix some drawing errors but my corrections are still a bit off because I am using the trackpad on my laptop. Basically we are viewing him from below, so we should see more of the underside of his nose and stuff, and the features need to project outwards off his face a bit more (even if he has a flat nose type). His eyes are also pointing in different directions from each other and can use some redrawing of the forms.

Otherwise it is just some small lighting/colour changes I made. His face is very pink/red at the moment so I knocked that down a notch. The rimlight is really boring at the moment so I tried getting more interesting shapes there that also describe the forms better.

Hope this helps.