/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6883019
1. The curve of the nose in inconsistent with the rest of the face and so the eyes are uneven.
2. Your lips are way too far below the nose
3. Lips too close to the chin
4. It's okay to give your females a prefrontal cortex.
5. Shading the eyelids is one of the most important parts of conveying emotion.
6. Your jaw is off, but it's because the face isn't aligned. Her face is basically twisted
7. The neck isn't a tube. Remember to draw the traps and sternocleidomastoids.