/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3792846
>no AA at a small res
>no pressure sensitivity whatsoever
>not drawn over a sketch
is this really you or is it a troll answer?

>>3487264
jesus anon

>>3007602
>no screentones
screentones used in any non-traditional manga are an eyesore imo. they're not essential by any means. op could do better to do some value studies though..

>left to right
if you write your comics right to left as a native english speaker you should kill yourself immediately

>your panelling is very boring
gonna agree on this one. op's definitely playing it a little too safe on paneling, especially where action is occuring.
op, comparing your page to this >>3007638 is a moot point. all your panels are about the same size, so my eye isn't drawn to anywhere in particular. the comparison you posted is a 2-page spread where a single panel takes up over 75% of that huge space. my eye is forced to linger on that huge panel before wandering to the smaller ones, not only because of it's size, but because of values, flow, ect.

you've clearly got a long way to go, so try your best to learn from your mistakes instead of declaring your paneling "good enough" when you've barely even left the starting line.

>>2855443
dont post links to children's social media you fucking retard

>>2845307
>I will copy cartoon anatomy and that will help me learn real anatomy

>>2738627
>putting "porn thread" in a name field instead of subject field

>>2618070

> HAHA IM POOR AND A VIRGIN, JOKES ON YOU !!