/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

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>>3510120
>why can't this guy draw people standing on the ground properly??
>why can't he discipline his hand before it reaches the paper to not become a loose goose neck??
>why can't he stay outside long enough to finish a damn drawing??
>why is he gouache so thin?? is he this thrifty with his cheap ass gouache??? I can practically see the whites of the paper
>has he ever heard of under drawing???
>why can't this guy properly plan a city painting instead of slapping some random ass buildings on the horizon line and calling it a town???

I know I have a lot of things to work on desu, but bully me more, it motivates me :3c
Also, the fork weapon is a reference to that character from a quote in Anna Karenina