/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4023722
Not bad art, just bad composition and awkward pose/angle. Looks awkward with foreshadowing of legs, keep practicing drapery (put more angular shapes along with your smooth ones) and add some hard shading on legs.

Would buy for 20-30

>>4019428
its that a suit under the robe or hes fuckin naked bout to flash? the left axe thing on the helmet isnt as curved as the other side

also expanse your canvas, i can tell the hand on the right is being confined. redraw that. your robe is fine...? try to remember that the crease focus on the angles between forearm and the arm itself

here's an example of a recent piece im workin on. otherwise go ahead and start outlining